Student Work- Yen Jie

'stay away of my best friend's! Matt angry like a lion.
'What strong'? said Ben
'Are you remember,you have been promised ....'Matt stared at the girl.
'I think we need to sort thing out' , said Ben.

Ben and Matt were best friend, they live nearly. They always playing together.
Ben's father lost his work . Indirectly, his family became poor. Matt asked his
father to lend a helping hand for a few days.Finally ,his father agreed.After
that ,everything gradually getting will.They promised not found a girlfriend .

Now,everything change when Ben find a girlfriend.He gradually getting away from Matt.....
'I'm sorry for so impulse ' Matt apologized.
'Maybe ,I really wrong' Ben said hisself.

1. 很多简单句子继续犯错 - check highlighted yellow
2. Do word count