Year 11 Revision: Sentence and Grammatical Errors

Write the sentences into your book and correct them on your own before you get help from Quillbot. You must always write / describe the errors made in the sentences.
Language: English
Subject: English language > Grammar
Age: 16 - 17

Year 11 Revision: Sentence and Grammatical Errors

Write the sentences into your book and correct them on your own before you get help from Quillbot.
You must always write / describe the errors made in the sentences.

On a shinny beautiful saturday Hazim and danish went on a fishing trip at Lumut jetty.

Read the sentence and correct the errors. Describe the correction.

'yes, me too,'. Hazim reply.

Read the sentence and correct the errors. Describe the correction.

I wrote this latter to tell about the number of tourist visiting Bangar for the past year.

Read the sentence and correct the errors. Describe the correction.

Many tourist come to our town for its lush rainforest and rich culture.

Read the sentence and correct the errors. Describe the correction.

Sweats trickle down the side of her face as she waited patiently in her car.

Read the sentence and correct the errors. Describe the correction.

We went to a movie after school and laughed a lot.

Add adjective(s) and adverb(s) to the sentence.

The stars were lighting up the sky.

Add adjective(s) and adverb(s) to the sentence.

One of the boy were crying quitely in the corner of the classroom.

Read the sentence and correct the errors. Describe the correction.

I open the door. I walk inside. I pull my luggage. I put it aside. I walk to the window. I saw the taxi drove away. I cried.

Read the sentences carefully. It needs interesting words and better sentence structure. Try to improve it.

Kara smiled. She opened her hand. It was a watch. I gave her the watch. It had diamonds. It was a pretty watch. She placed the watch in my right hand. She felt sick.

Show, Not Tell. Rewrite the paragraph using interesting words like adjectives and adverbs. Try to add more details to the watch and to the character.