Writing an essay template

Language: English
Subject: English language > Sentences
School grade: Malaysia Malaysia
Age: 16 - 17

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In the first place, downloading music without paying is wrong because it means that musicians do not get properly paid for their work. This is unfair as they might have spent many months writing and recording it.

Moreover, if people really value music then they should pay for it. If it is wrong to steal CDs from shops, then it is just as wrong to steal from the Internet.

Many people who pirate music from the Internet think they are loyal music fans. However, I believe that what they are doing is bad for music and musicians

To sum up, pirating music damages the music business. If fans started paying for their music, it might reduce the prices of downloads and CDs, which would be good for everyone.

In addition, althoughsome people say they are helping musicians to become famous by sharing illegal downloads with friends, this is not the case. There is no need to download because they can send their friends links to music they have discovered.