Correction (mistakes)+writing (expressing opinions)

Language: English
Subject: English language > Grammar
School grade: Ukraine Ukraine
Find and correct a mistake in each sentence
Write your opinion on any of these topics. Use special phrases.
obviously/ hopefully/ unfortunately/ undoubtedly/ there is no doubt that/ as far as i am concerned / from my perspective/I was under impression/I think otherwise /in my view
1. He describing the situation in great detail.
1. Kids shouldn’t get their first smartphones before the age of 13.
2. Advertising aimed at children should be banned.
3. People should stop eating meat.
2. Harry Potter is a great book to reading.
3. Oscar Wilde is one of the most greatest writer.
4. I am not believe that people will ever stop eating meat.
5. There're less children now than it used to be 50 years ago.
6. I have never buy any fur.
7. This film is really worth to watch.